My+comments+on+1st+video+speech

Topic:
The topic is about Carnivorous Plant and I think it is interesting and suitable because the audiences will know more of plant species especially about carnivorous plant.

Intro:

 * 1) I have asking some questions at the early that related to my topic to get attentions from audiences and it need to be improved to attract more.
 * 2) I also have introduced my speech clearly but I looked so nervous at the beginning.
 * 3) The preview of my speech is quite good but still need to be improved.

Body:

 * 1) I think the body of my speech was great as well as I have tried my best and the supporting points is easy to understand.
 * 2) The connectives that you used were quite good, but it need some improvements.

Conclusion:

 * 1) I have closed the topic clearly and nicely, but still can be improved to make more creative ending.
 * 2) There was no memorable statement.

Language:

 * 1) The language that I used was clear and can be understood by audiences. Keep it up !
 * 2) There was a minor grammar error.
 * 3) I also have used standard pronunciations and can do more better.

Delivery:

 * 1) Less of non-verbal communication.
 * 2) The voice sometimes becomes quite slowly and and need to practice more for into in some part.
 * 3) The time management was good.
 * 4) The eye contact with audience still need to be improved.

Overall, I have done a god job. Any weaknesses have to be improved to make me a future best speaker in public. God Willing... = =