Video+comments+on+1st+speech+by+Farhana

Topic

 * Your topic is on Carnivorous plant.


 * I think it is relevant to the audience as it is a good information to the audience.


 *  You talked specifically about the topic.

Introduction

 * You introduce topic clearly


 * You gain the audience's attention but i'm sure you can do better


 * You need to preview the body of the speech next time.

Body

 * Your main points and supporting points is clear


 * You organized your speech well


 * Your connectives between points are clear and effective

Conclusion

 * You did not summarize the main points as well as the memorable statement

Language

 * For the language and pronunciation you do it clearly and concisely.


 * <span style="font-family: 'Lucida Console',Monaco,monospace;">There was some grammar errors and but you used standard pronunciation

<span style="font-family: 'Lucida Console',Monaco,monospace;">Delivery

 * <span style="font-family: 'Lucida Console',Monaco,monospace;">Good non-verbal communication but an be improve next time


 * <span style="font-family: 'Lucida Console',Monaco,monospace;"> Your voice is just nice


 * <span style="font-family: 'Lucida Console',Monaco,monospace;"> The duration is between required time which is good


 * <span style="font-family: 'Lucida Console',Monaco,monospace;">You had good eye contact with the audience but i'm sure you can do better next time

<span style="font-family: 'Lucida Console',Monaco,monospace;">Anyway, it was a good job! I'm sure you can do better next time. (^^,)